Prefatory comment: I am thoroughly familiar with the first three seasons of Mad Men, but have not yet seen any episodes of season 4. As I said in my message on the main page of this group, I don't…Continue
"It's either this guy is an installed computer bot with some sort of typing script or the guy has herpesviral encephilitis that causes him to not be able to make new memories and repeat his days doing the stuff mentioned above."
"There is a writer's group on AoM, actually. I suggest you join and ask there.
I am also a writer. I don't consider myself an authority, but I can repeat some good advice about pacing, at least at the outset, which is to say that the…"